I have ONE suggestion...and you can ignore it if you want, but how about little floating particulates in the air? You know when you shine a flashlight at night and you can see the dust particles in the beam? Maybe you could do that for the ray of light shining into his cell...?
This is cool :)
ReplyDeleteI have ONE suggestion...and you can ignore it if you want, but how about little floating particulates in the air? You know when you shine a flashlight at night and you can see the dust particles in the beam? Maybe you could do that for the ray of light shining into his cell...?
Ah! YEsH! I like that! I'll give it a whirl.
ReplyDeleteHow can I make the words more professional? Something about the text seems off......
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